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RE: Her Own Shadow: The Weekend Freewrite - 1/25/2020
Hi @tristancarax. This post is very special. It's a totally round story (I don't know if it's the correct expression in English). I mean it has an extraordinary beginning, then a great outcome and an end before the end. Excellent!
Dialogues followed by a brief description and then returning to the dialogue is a very smart writing option and makes us think about what the protagonists will say.
I loved reading you ... as always
It was meant to tie back in. I'm glad you caught that. I was also focused on Using this video, thinking about the different types of stakes was a new challenge for me. I liked how the story came out by using them to the best of my ability.