Hello @sultrydreamer
I'm a little confused with this letter, it's supposed to be a letter that you dedicate to a partner, and you're just presenting a sort of story.
I think you should read the contest rules better, in this and any other community.
On the other hand, you need to verify yourself in the next post, otherwise, your next posts will be muted:

https://steemit.com/hive-113376/@colombiaoriginal/verificate-y-se-parcero-de-colombia-original-octava-semana