Steemit Engagement Challenge (week 4): Share your Original Talent : A Peom on Before You Decide by @gracyakan
HELLO LADIES AND GENTLEMEN
BEFORE YOU DECIDE
After 20 years of regrettable decision
She still chosed to stay in toleration
Because of the motherly compassion
Love without contention
For the children of her youth.
After 15 years of a wrong choice
She determined to resolve with poise
Not minding the threatful noise
To leave the home not wanted,but not alone;
With the children of her youth.
He stopped her from taking the kids
And warned her from seeing them with gifts
But she never stopped even in a die threat
Until she secured a place in their heart
For they were constantly in her heart.
After 10 years of deceitful ties
And a choice they made not hers
She broke the ties without hype
This time,who knows with what heart
For she abandoned the children of her youth behind.
Each decision a mother makes
After regretting the one made on the altar
Comes with mind and emotions jade
But indeed requires critical mind work
For the sake of the innocent.
The innocent were not in the pretest
They only came as a product of the post test
They didn't make the choice you now detest
Your decision should prove them guiltless
For nature itself pronounce them innocent.
The pains of childbirth
The tears of cold days
In their heart will never be
For they were neither witnesses
Your impact from teenage age
is what will trace
A throne for you in their heart.
So,when this "DECISION" comes along
Do not in a haste play along
Place the children in it all along
So you wouldn't become a childless mother in the run
For your tomorrow depends on them all alone.
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A poem can express all hidden feelings so I think you have done it nicely in your poem. When we read it we also felt that feeling. I wish you good luck and keep on composing poems.
Thanks for the encouragement, appreciation and wishing me well
I have never been a fan of poems because I seize to be a literature student since form3 simple because I always fine it difficult in understanding the subject. But reading this your poem, I can boost that I understood everything because of the way you took to write the poem
It's really a sorrowful poem because I can imagine the pains the woman was going through her husband's house. And she couldn't leave because of the love she had for her children. Nice Poem though it took me sometime before I could understand it
Thanks for reading and understanding it at last
I almost never understand poems 😅
But when I read this one I think I get something
A woman who had kids early, married the wrong person and is now trying to leave the marriage 😅
I hope I'm correct
You wrote a very nice poem
Yes because of wrong decision, thanks for reading
The pain of childbirth.. The pain of raising child up.. The pain of embracing them.. We should take care of our mothers. They have sacrificed a lot and still sacrificing for us.
Thanks for sharing this.
That's true, thanks for visiting my blog
You are really doing good, I love you poem.
Thanks for sharing your great talent.
Wish you success.
Thanks for reading and wishing me well
Greetings, good to see that you like poetry.
It is a writing with a lot of feeling.
Thanks for the appreciation and justified rating, am grateful
This is such a touching and wonderful poem, how great mother's is. May we not make mistake and end up with a wrong partner. Thank you for sharing.
Thanks dear
Well done! This is a beautiful poem.
I do hope you are keeping all your poems together so that one day your can share it!
Keep up the good work!
Thanks Mam am grateful for the encouragement
Thanks Mam am grateful for the encouragement
You are a great poet, keep it up ! You are going places with this
Thanks
Hola @gracyakan; Parc que eres buena para escribir. Las decisiones siempre nos llevan a algún lugar lo bueno es que siempre debemos tomar una.
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