It was an Incredible Story.

Sarah Walker was going on a road trip with her college friends for the first time. Her mother was really against this decision as she was her only child. She was very possessive of Sarah.

Every Mother is Very possessive of her Child. My Mother is also very possessive in making Any Decision to go outside the Home xD.

Her father helped her to get the permission and now she was on her way with great excitement.

This was an Amazing Also My father give me permission to go Outside the Home.

About the Story, The Story was Made interested when Dacoit Stop The Bus,

She shouted for help. The entire bus was dead silenced.

It is a fact that the legs of the good ones tremble in front of the pistol.

It was Really an Incredible Story, You have Written the Story very Well, Best of luck with the Contest.