Hi dearest writer,

Your story of El Silbón presents a vivid portrayal of a haunting character rooted in rich folklore. The narrative effectively conveys his eerie presence and chilling actions, creating an impactful atmosphere.

Since we are required to assess eachothers work. I very respectfully mention that further elaboration on Joaquín's transition from a pampered child to a vengeful specter could deepen the emotional resonance and add layers to his motivations. Maybe you could say something like this:

Driven by anger and entitlement, Joaquín killed his father when his demands went unmet, unable to control his fury...

I would also use shorter sentences as they fit in the genre of micro stories.

You have mentioned:

It should be noted that when writing, I had to delete this story again and again because I know that it must be sent in a way that it is excellent quality content,

O Yes, I think each one of us has been doing this. I wake up in the middle of the night just to add or delete something—of course, up until it's time for evaluation by the teachers. This dedication is evident in your words, dear friend. Wishing you all the best for the challenge!

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