Together and Alone
Birds of a Feather flock Together
As we call out to each other
We're on our way
Hearts feel light
full of delight
Nature's play
We'll be home soon
Sun down.. then moon
and rest together end of day
We're a noisy crowd
and very loud
After all we've lots to say.
This is what I really look like
If others could actually see.
I'm not from this planet
I've lived for eternity
I'd love to go home
That's not yet to be
There's something to do
Before I'm free.
I'll just have to wait
and plan patiently.
El inglés está en forma poética. No hablo español y utilicé el traductor de Google...
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Dios los cría y ellos se juntan
Mientras nos llamamos el uno al otro
Estamos en camino
Los corazones se sienten ligeros
lleno de deleite
El juego de la naturaleza
Estaremos en casa pronto
Sol puesto...luego luna
y descansar juntos al final del día
Somos una multitud ruidosa
y muy ruidoso
Después de todo tenemos mucho que decir.
Así es como realmente me veo
Si otros realmente pudieran ver.
no soy de este planeta
He vivido por la eternidad
Me encantaría volver a casa
Eso aún no ha de ser
hay algo que hacer
Antes de que sea libre.
tendré que esperar
y planificar con paciencia.
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Uh Oh What do I do now? I thought the 2 Venezuela groups were the same... Just learning my way around... Is there a way to fix this? Thank you.
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ok. thank you
Can we just let it go this one time? a courtesy pardon for a first time mess up? People have voted on it.
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Awesome. Evidently I posted in the wrong Venezuela writers group. @inspiracion Has recommended to delete the post, simply post mistake, and repost in the right group.
The groups are indeed confusing. I had that too but those error posts are a burden as well.
The intention is we post in different groups but personal I don't see it as such a problem (that is the free writers attitude).
I'll ask @inspiracion if we can just let it go this time. One time mess up get a courtesy pardon.
You discuss it with her.. I just noticed I messed up my entry yesterday again.
She is fine with leaving as it is. I didn't think I was the only one stumbling around out there.
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Yes friend everything is fine😊
Hola amiga, cada imagen te permite expresar tus emociones y dejar volar tu creatividad, dejándola plasmada en tus hermosas líneas.
Te deseo mucho éxito en el taller.
Saludos.
Gracias. Espero participar en estas aventuras de escritura con otros.
Este poema me encantó, pues el "yo lírico" contrasta la idea de unión y compañerismo con la de soledad. Creo que ambos sentimientos nos han rodeado en muchas etapas de nuestras vidas. Te deseo mucha suerte. Siempre es grato leerte.
Thank you. I am in awe of your presentations and the platform you provide.
Gracias por tu apoyo. Tus palabras son valiosas para mí. Un abrazo.
We can see unity among birds, unlike humans.
We can find the proper answers to any difficulty if we are patient enough.
You describe two images really nicely. Good luck.
Thank you for the encouraging review.