RE: Steemit Crypto Academy Season 4 Week 1 || socios.com - Blockchain Based Platform for Sports Industry by @beewrites
Hi @beewrites, Thanks for taking my class.
Based on the homework that you have made, here are the details of the assessment you get:
| Explanation of Socios.com Platform | 0.7/1 |
| Effects of Blockchain entering the sports industry | 0.5/1 |
| Personal opinion about Socios.com as an investment vehicle | 0.5/1 |
| Install and explore the Socios.com app | 1/2 |
| Fundamental analysis of a fan token | 0/2 |
| Conclusion | 0.8/1 |
| Follows Rules and Guidelines | 0.8/1 |
| Procedures and structure of writing | 0.4/1 |
| Total | 4.7/10 |
My Reviews and Suggestions:
Overall, your explanation is still very shallow. As in the answers to questions number 1, 2. and 3. The information you provide is still too general and very little. Try adding some additional information.
In question number 5, you can actually choose the fan token without having to open it through the application. You can see it through the Socios.com website or in the lessons I gave earlier this week.
Your writing structure is still messy, try to learn again how to make a neat and good article.
There are some screenshots that you don't watermark, please pay attention to the rules and guidelines.