RE: Steemit Crypto Academy Season 4 Week 1 | Socios.com - Blockchain Based Platform For Sports Industry
Hi @diegopreman, Thanks for taking my class.
Based on the homework that you have made, here are the details of the assessment you get:
| Explanation of Socios.com Platform | 0.7/1 |
| Effects of Blockchain entering the sports industry | 0.5/1 |
| Personal opinion about Socios.com as an investment vehicle | 0.5/1 |
| Install and explore the Socios.com app | 1.2/2 |
| Fundamental analysis of a fan token | 0.8/2 |
| Conclusion | 0.5/1 |
| Follows Rules and Guidelines | 1/1 |
| Procedures and structure of writing | 0.5/1 |
| Total | 5.7/10 |
My Reviews and Suggestions:
You have completed the task.
In general, your explanation is still too shallow, and I see the explanation has been explained by other friends. Try to provide more information for each given question.
Learn more about how to make good articles, your writing structure can still be improved.
If you use bullet points to explain something, you should not make it to the middle of the page. Use the text in the middle only for the title and description of the images.
You didn't show the real steps of creating an account on the Socios application that you do.
Fundamental analysis you make is still very shallow.
There are several features of the Socios.com application that you did not explain in question number 5
Thank you for the correction Professor, i will improve the content deeply next time.