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RE: Crypto Academy Season 3 Beginners course - Homework Post for Task 2: [Blockchain, Decentralization, Block explorer by @yousafharoonkhan] Por @psicoaprendiendo

Hi @psicoaprendiendo, Thank you for taking interest in the 2nd Task of the Beginners Fixed Class. Your grades are as follows:

Assessment Aspects
Rating
Presentation/Use of Markdowns
1 / 2
Follow Rules and Guideline
1 / 2
Quality of Analysis
0.5 / 2
Clarity of Language
1.5 / 2
Originality
1 / 2
TOTAL
5

My Review dan Suggestions:

  • You complete the task.

it could also eradicate an almost indestructible evil that tears the governments of the world apart from "Corruption" since through a decentralized system there is no single entity that administers the resources of a state, if not that allows the majority to manage and monitor those resources.

  • You explained that a decentralized system can reduce Corruption, but you did not clearly explain where the usefulness of this system lies. For example, you can explain that government data should be stored on a transparent blockchain network so that it cannot be manipulated.

  • Your explanation is too shallow, study the discussion more deeply, so you can add more information to your post.

  • Use numbered lists, bullet listed, etc. to highlight important points.

Thank you!

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 3 years ago 
¡Hola Profesor! @wahyunahrul quiero decir le que estoy enteramente agradecido con usted por haber tomado en cuenta mi participación. La cual tuve que Re-postear debido a que luego de ser calificada por el profesor @awesononso y @steemcurator02 no paso por mi publicación.

aqui dejo el link de mi tarea calificada

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Capture de la calicación de mi tarea

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