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RE: CRYPTO ACADEMY:::: HOMEWORK FOR BEGINNER'S CLASS BY @wahyunahrul

in SteemitCryptoAcademy3 years ago (edited)

Hi @sammylinks, Thank you for taking my class.
Based on the homework that you have made, here are the details of the assessment you get:

Assessment Aspects
Rating
The explanation of why whales are feared
1
Taking advantages of the whales existence
1.2
Graph analysis based on whales phases
1.2
Selection of a cryptocurrency
1.5
Graph analysis of selected cryptocurrencies
0
Conclusion
1.2
Procedure and structure of writing
1
Follow Rules and Guidelines
0.8
TOTAL
7.9

My Review dan Suggestions:

  • The answer of number 1 it's good, but it will be better if you show an example of a certain cryptocurrency experiencing a price increase/decrease caused by a whale, and it would be even better if you showed a screenshot of the news.

  • You didn't include screenshots of the latest Top 10 cryptocurrency while you do your homework. Please re-read the rules and guidelines.

  • There are some writings that can be improved, I see that there are some bold subheaders, while others are not bold.

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  • You did not answer question number 5 correctly, I want you to make a simulation of price movements where you are whales and you will create a scheme where you will buy and sell to take the profit, please pay attention to the questions that have been given.
    Example:

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  • Place your screenshots horizontally for easier viewing.


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Don't put pictures like this


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Put it horizontally like this

Thank you!

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 3 years ago 

Thanks for your speedy review. I appreciate that. Your wonderful suggestions will put to good use next time

Thanks for the write up, quite educative

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