Hello pal

You did well and I appreciate how you wrote with so much devotion and zeal please keep it up friend

I would advise you to go back to your achievement 4 to learn some important markdowns to make your post very attractive and understable.

Marketing: Lastly STEEM can focus on marketing to attract more investors to the platform This could involve creating a strong brand identity running social media campaigns & collaborating with influencers in the blockchain industry.

Yeah you are right man, marketing of steemit would attract much more big investors into the platform and at that stage we would see awesomely development on steem Blockchain.

Thanks for sharing, try comment on my post too
https://steemit.com/hive-108451/@starrchris/steemit-crypto-academy-contest-season-8-week-5-let-s-think-about-steemit-s-future