I must commend the effort put together to create this piece. It was well organized and the use of English was impressive. You were able to give a relatable personal experience.
P.s; you should check out if this is a Typographical error and correct it soon.

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Thanks for the feedback, and for your time, I'll do as soon as possible... But I'm afraid I don't understand, what Typo means
Please read through again, I edited the comment already
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