Hello friend, you have done well with your post and I am glad you made corrections but I will still be making a few corrections based on my observation.

• Avoid repeating sentences just to make your post long. I found this severally in your post and It will just get people tired of reading. An example is in the image below.

• You should download grammarly or any other english writng software to help with your post, you made so many errors with spelling.

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