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RE: Steemit Crypto Academy Contest - S2W3 - Blockchain in our lives - By @jamezmccoy
Thank you, @jamezmccoy for publishing an article in the Steemit Crypto Academy community today. We have accessed your article and we present the result of the assessment below.
| Criteria | Remark |
|---|---|
| Verified user | ✅ |
| #steemexclusive | ✅ |
| Free of Plagiarism | ✅ |
| #Club | Club5050 |
| Bot free | ✅ |
Comment/Recommendation
- You have written about your opinion on how the blockchain is changing our everyday life, although, it's quite shallow.
- Immutability is one of the benefits of blockchain like you have highlighted, you have brought some inconsistencies in while discussing the disadvantages, you were talking about cryptocurrency, that's out of the context. You have talked about the future of blockchain without picking any sector to explain how it works.
- You have also discussed the implementation of blockchain in the health sector with no use case of a company and what success they have achieved so far.
Overall, good effort. There are a lot of merged paragraphs you should work on separating and work on compliance with the context subsequently.
Rating
Total| 6.75/10