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RE: Steemit Crypto Academy Contest / S2W3 - Blockchain in our lives. by @cutlass
Thank you, @cutlass for publishing an article in the Steemit Crypto Academy community today. We have accessed your article and we present the result of the assessment below.
| Criteria | Remark |
|---|---|
| Verified user | ✅ |
| #steemexclusive | ✅ |
| Free of Plagiarism | ✅ |
| #Club | Club75 |
| Bot free | ✅ |
Comment/Recommendation
- You have written about your opinion on how blockchain adoption is making every life easier.
- Immutability can be considered one of the great advantages of blockchain which guarantees the safety of data saved and you have written about the disadvantages, there are a few incomplete points over there. You have shared your opinion about the future of blockchain but you failed to pick a sector to explain how it works and how certain you are of the future.
- You have also shared one of the ways the implementation has worked in the health sector but you failed to pick a company as a use case to measure how they work with blockchain so far.
Overall, good effort. You should make your presentation better, there were many paragraphs merged and improve the quality of your analysis.
Rating
Total| 6.25/10
Thank you very much professor