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RE: Steemit Crypto Academy Contest Season 3 Week 1 - The Metaverse by @rafk

in SteemitCryptoAcademy3 years ago

forgetting their normal activities like, playing, eating, sleep, since every aspect is immerse in the metaverse.

In this way people are likely to affect their mental as well as physical health.

I find you article very informative . Please don't mind if i suggest to make use of upper case letter at the begining of paragraphs and bullet points . I would suggest to make use of GRAMMERLY because that would automatically pick up mistakes and you can correct them.

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Thanks so much sir. I have correct sir..

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