Sunrise
As night gives way to day's first gentle light,
The sky awakens with a golden glow,
And birdsong fills the air, a joyful sight,
As nature's grand display begins to show.
The sun ascends, a blazing, brilliant ball,
Its rays extending outward, far and wide,
And all around, the world awakens, all
Anew, as if reborn with morning's tide.
The sky's hues shift and change with each new hour,
From crimson reds to shades of pink and blue,
And in this grand display of nature's power,
We witness life's great cycle start anew.
So rise, oh sun, and paint the world with light,
And fill our hearts with wonder and delight.
... sounds like a song. Or a prayer.
It's a prayer. I don't have sufficient SP so i can't post always
Don't worry. There is no pressure. Writing and publishing needs patience.
Oh, a true sonnet! Very skillful!
Only the sun in the picture (photographed by yourself?) seems not to ascend but to descend.
;-)
It is dependent on how you view it.
It could be setting and also it could be rising.
I got the picture from a site online. I don't snap sir or ma
Your words sound great!
But you should cite the source of your images whether yours or taken from free image providing sites like pixabay, pexel, unsplash, etc. Can you please edit and do it now?