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RE: Protect your peace by changing yourself/ poem
If I read this, it feels, or should I say looks we are all captured in our own little small world. Blindfolded or tunnel vision makes it hard to see the human in all the tumult.
Hate is a strange feeling. Especially if you feel it for someone you never met.
What do you think @sumarni123 @ronnie10 @suryati1 about this poem? Or are we all too tired to talk about war and hate?
The poem talks about assumptions.. But, there are some assumptions here and there in the text itself..
It describes The assumptions of future . We waste our time by thinking of future
The rest is reality the hatred the jealousy the rush to move faster we all forget to live
We just are making efforts to survive. We are greedy of what we don't have and we forget to show gratitude of what we have.
Yes some time we felt hate for someone even if we don't meet them. The question is that hatred is without any reason?
Not at all!. Our behavior our doings make the special place in someone's heart or fell in other's eyes.
The case in like us we never met kitty but we felt soft and kind feelings for us.
Moreover we shouldn't hate but always took stand against the wrong ones and forgive in silence. This is the best way to live your life
Temanku @wakeupkitty saya ingin mencoba membalas komentar dengan bahasa puisi juga. Saya membaca, puisi itu mengambarkan tentang kekecewaan dalam kehidupan. penulis ingin memperbaiki yang tidak baik menjadi baik dan penuh cinta.
Kawan
Kepalsuan itu hanya Kepalsuan
garisan hidup selalu terjawab saat kita menempatkan diri dimana posisi hidup kita.
Apa yang kita semai itu nanti yang kita tuai.
Kawan
Dalam melangkah kita tetap pada langkah kita
keburukan akan ada di sekeliling kita
jauhkan rasa kecewa itu
kita pagar diri dengan kebaikan
kita taburi sekeliling dengan cinta
karena semua itu akan kembali cinta untuk
diri kita😘
#poem #steemexclusive