You have time to edit so I would say: give it a go!
What I miss is what the story is about. Can you tell this in your own words? There's no need to make it very long but just mentioning those two conflicts is not enough.

So the film is about XXXXX a XXXXX and he xxxxx inside prison xxxxx and he xxxx ..

The rest I find actually tood but what I miss most is the story. You can tell a bit to make it attractive for others to look at.

BTW there's a large collection of film reviews in the community NETFLIX & STREAMING which you find if you look at my subscriptions. A good place to be and also to have a look at how @netflixer writes film reviews.

So add a bit and give yourself a better grade because if you come up with a 4 you know you can do a better job.

@ronnie10 you should also set 10% beneficiary for @ steem.amal. This benefits you. Please, try to follow the rules since we do everything possible to let the participants benefit from everything Steemit its communities have to offer.

#wewrite and #comment