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RE: Dear Diary: Our Government Now Taxes Tabacco Very High To Discourage Smoking

in #health6 years ago

You have a minor grammatical mistake in the following sentence:

Now back to smoking, it is reasonable that the government impose much taxes on vice products like tobacco and alcoholic beverages but sometimes we have to work on great lengths in order to enforce the restriction on using such products for a more healthier people which in a way will translate to happiness which also most of us pursue in our lives.
It should be people who instead of people which.

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