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RE: WEIGHT LOSS: FOODS TO CONSIDER

in #health6 years ago

Hi, @kingwesedo. There are a few things I would like to say regarding your article:

  • Diet is an important component to achieve an optimal state of health. It's good you were trying to educate people on certain food which you thought will have a greater impact on weight loss but it will be great if you can fire up discussion regarding weight loss first. People need to know a healthy weight loss is not only concern with the concept of calories in calories out. Maybe you can consider making an article about it, sometimes in the future.
  • Your last 3 images were not cited. You need to cite it and if all of those images belong to you, you need to state it.
  • You need to cite some references pertaining to your article. It's absolutely vital in this community for an author to always give a sufficient credit to the original author.

Please note that I'm not in any way, try to disapprove your work. You've done an excellent job here, but you can make it better. If you have any problem regarding STEM-related articles, you can join steemSTEM Discord Channel and we will be glad to assist you.

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thanks a bunch @chloroform i would sure take note of my flaws and make them right in my next post. thanks again i really appreciate

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