Deep Water
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6 years ago in #haikucontest by tristancarax (66)
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The mood in the last verse matches with the full sky and the solitude of the pole.. that's Venice lagoon in october you know 🙂
Venice, Italy? If so, I've slept on the streets there and may have see the site the picture was taken from.
Next time you come give me a buzz!
Will do.
"beams up in heaven" introduces the theme of salvation, that the third verse explains in a nice way, full of significance...literal and metaphorical.
Interesting perspective. Thanks for the feed back. You have been very thoughtful in your responses.
8-)
Wow! You gave a feeling from the spiritual and the physical perspectives. Deep water indeed Tristan!