My Entry - Mizu No Oto - Every Image Has Its Haiku - Edition #23 (English)steemCreated with Sketch.steemstreems (58)in #haikucontest • 5 years ago bricks finally cool around waiting telescope. lookers miss day's death
a day that ends, an absence...
Is this a suggestion for the second line?
If so. Nice!
If not. Still nice :-)