Untitled Entry for Mizu No Oto Haiku Contest #45
A certain sheen
On the water surface:
Is otter's sky
Photo by @marcoriccardi
Written for Mizo No Oto - Every Image Has It's Haiku contest #45 posted by @bananafish
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A certain sheen
On the water surface:
Is otter's sky
Photo by @marcoriccardi
Written for Mizo No Oto - Every Image Has It's Haiku contest #45 posted by @bananafish
Posted using Partiko Android
Beautiful haiku! I hope you will remain with us in the next editions, since I think you have some knack for it.
Thanks, I'll try see what I can come up with..
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Very nice. The repetition of the 's' sound ties the haiku together, as does the linking of water and sky. There's a peaceful sense of connected existence.
Thanks! It sounded right to me but I didn't actually notice that about the Ss...
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That's the nice thing about writing...poetry or any other form. Sometimes a natural rhythm sets in, your ear takes over for you and makes the magic happen :)