Mizu No Oto - Every Image Has Its Haiku - WEEK #21

in #haikucontest • 6 years ago (edited)



Looking this pic and thinking about that image I did this haiku and hope you like it:

Very hot season.
I can see the warm water
So far is the cold


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     6 years ago (edited)

    Perfect metric 5-7-5, clearly reflects the contrast between hot and cold seasons.

    Interesting exercise that leads to a multitude of appreciations.

    Blessings and prosperity.

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     6 years ago 

    Thanks, @amigoponc, for to read my haiku and for you good wishes.

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       6 years ago 

      Welcome to Mizu no Oto! Thank you for your haiku, I see you already master the kigo principle.

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       6 years ago 

      Helo @bananafish, thanks for you welcome. This is the first haiku I write.

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