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RE: Mizu No Oto - Every Image Has Its Haiku Contest - WEEK #2

in #haikucontest6 years ago

Hullo! :D Here is my entry for your haiku contest ~
https://steempeak.com/haikucontest/@kaelci/an-entry-for-bananafish-s-every-image-has-its-haiku-contest


Windswept leaf lies trapped,
Enjoying Autumn's embrace;
Disgruntled spider.

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A haiku that combines simplicity, delicacy and lightness a perfect kigo and its kireji. Very good!
In case you want to learn about the Bananafish Realms, here's the application to curie for the October and November support - f3nix

This is lovely with a great ending showing the perspective of the poor spider!

Thank you! A bit of humor is ok for a haiku!

:D Glad you liked it! :)

I tried to think of something a bit more tranquil, but that tiny spider sitting there and glaring at that leaf in her web... it just kept leaping out at me.

Your haiku somehow remained impressed in my mind.

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