In the shade of trees - Haiku Contest - WEEK #6
Success is a journey, not a destination. The doing is often more important than the outcome. Arthur Ashe
Dear Friends
Now I participate in the Haiku contest of @bananafish in its sixth week Mizu No Oto - Every Image Has Its Haiku Contest - WEEK #6, by the invitation of my friend @vdux
Now I invite my friends @lydon.sipe and @creatr.
To express it I have used only 17 syllables summarized in a Haiku poetry of my inspiration.
PROMPT FIGURE
[photo credit: @f3nix]
In the shade of trees ....
they would soon rest in their house
of the long journey.
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Reference: What Is Haiku Poetry? - Definition & Examples
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Gracias por tu haiku! Me parece que el signo de exclamación al final del segundo verso hace que el tercer verso quede un poco desatado.
Me atrevo a sugerir una variante:
In the shade of trees ....
they would soon rest in their house
from the long journey
(Marco)
Gracias Marco, ya procedi a realizar tu sugerencia me parecio acertada. Saludos
Bonito haiku @felixgarciap, transmite paz espiritual ¡Suerte!
Muchas gracias @oscarina. Saludos
Lovely! Tell a story, also conceals a deeper story.