Mizu No Oto Haiku Contest - Week #09 - @bananafish

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My haiku entry based on @f3nix’s picture:

Apis God worship -
“Just a relic from the past,”
says the Christian man.

Thank you,
Cyrus Emerson

Red Roses the audiobook for your consideration at the Voice Arts Awards (NYC), and the Grammys (LA). https://www.audible.com/pd/Fiction/Red-Roses-Audiobook/B07F2LWHPN

Red Roses narrated by Kira Omans
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Red Roses music by Rike Luxx
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Red Roses sound by Pond5
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Also, available from The Author:

Fear and Loathing in the State of Jefferson - ebook
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Lost Angel – Introduction with Ray Manzarek of The Doors
https://www.downpour.com/lost-angel?sp=249812

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Not the best haiku. See what you did there though.

I like about your haiku that it has an apostrophe, a dialogue, and a statement. It is so much longer than it seems.

Thanks for sharing, @cyemela

Thanks for the compliment.

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I like the way you introduced a mythological/religious reference without making the poem heavy. The "everyday" and slightly humorous exclamation keeps your haiku in the shiori side

Thanks. Thought of the Apis followers, LOL.

Saw some other haiku dealing with religion. Is this picture of a religious site?

Not at all! It's a statue outside the Parliament House of La Valletta, Malta. And, it's a clever game of perspective, the statue isn't huge, it's actually three cows of different sizes, one above the other. In the photo you can see only the front part of the smaller above the rear of the second :P
P.S. The statue is part of a series depicting Maltese proverbs... this one is "every part of the cow can be sold" (a sort of "there's hope for everybody" or "for any thing, you can find someone interested to it").

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