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RE: Mizu No Oto - Every Image Has Its Haiku - Edition #35 (English)
I did start working on entries, but totally slipped my mind. I feel like I was on the verge of something better, but I only had one finished. I wrote it as 5/7/5 and have only just noticed it doesn't count anymore, I missed the deadline anyway so hopefully i can get away with it this time ;)
Life always flowed here.
Footsteps wore this road through dirt
From the city seed.
You're still in time, payout is in 8 hours ;)
Writing in 5/7/5 is still legitimate, but there are many reasons to prefer a shorter measure. However, it is only a questionable current of thought that I have used as a model for the competition. Thanks for your haiku!
oh nooo!! Ohhh I thought i had deleted this but my connection was slow, I am so so sorry!
Ooops! But, why? It's a good haiku!