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RE: Entry: Mizu no Oto - Every image Has Its Haiku - Edition #47
I think this is a very good haiku, I like it a lot!
Nonethless, I feel something strange about the punctuation. I'd like you to explain a bit to me why you chose to put periods after the second and the third verse.
I can't help reading it like this:
Clear water.
A quiet moment
mixed up.
I have no explanation for it as stupid struggling with typing because I can hardly see what I am doing. 😭