It is extremely interesting that you have made your whole creative process known.
The haiku in its final form is very deep, and reading all the progressive approaches, which seem to me like sculpting a block of stone to obtain a shape, makes me understand that it was the best choice
Oh I am so happy to hear that! I often wonder if what is interesting to me will be interesting to anyone else. Hitting "publish" is an act of faith in myself.
And yes! Exactly! Writing haiku, for me, is a lot like carving stone, reducing the mass down to an essential thing.
I have a question: is my post a haibun?