Mizu No Oto - Every Image Has Its Haiku - Edition #33; My Entry
A preface to this post
Getting inspired for writing a story is not easy, but some times circumstances forces one to do it though it may sounds silly. But last week I was being one to follow that suit. The great @bananafish gave a spark to try it and I made it.
And now when I was scrolling through the feed I came across this Haiku Contest by the same @bananafish and I thought to participate.
About this contest
You should write a Haiku which simply means : The English haiku form is: a short (3-4 syllable) verse, a longer (5-6 syllable) verse, another short (3-4 syllable) verse.(google to know more about this.
The Picture prompt
Refer this link for more details, requirements and prices.
My Entry - Success
Based on this picture prompt
Winners aim sky
Slow steps makes easy path
Grows up like trees
Warm Regards and Cheers
Slow steps makes easy path
Grows up like trees
Warm Regards and Cheers
Grows up like trees
Warm Regards and Cheers
Welcome to Mizu No Oto!
Nice first attempt! Can I suggest a little hint? Try to resist the temptation to write a sentence for each verse. A haiku should be composed by only two "movements", separated by a cut (kireji), i.e.:
or
You are always welcome to give hints, no need to ask for it and in fact look forward to such short hints for improvements,.
My primary aim from steemit is that it is one of the best platform for being creative in many fields, May be there is a chance that inside there is talent but it need to be nurtured and need a spark to bring it out and you people are doing exactly that.
So thanks again and I will follow those guide lines and also will check again the other haikus..
Have a good day