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RE: Mizu No Oto - Every Image Has Its Haiku Contest - WEEK #1
I'm not sure I liked the idea of introducing the word 'gun' into a haiku about the sea and sky, but my creative resources failed me--and it late at night :)
No worries, it has nothing to do with a firearm It clearly paints a grey woven sky. The color is a strong image.
Thanks :)
Instead I think that it gives originality.. sometimes we need to be a bit puzzled..