PLAY an Anglo~Haïku by ZenJoyzenjoy (37)in #haiku • 7 years ago Some Play not to Loose There's some who Play to Win & Some just Love to Play Lucralover ~ ZenJoy #poetry #zenjoy #ravi #lucralover
Loose should be lose. Other than that, you have a good message coming through here. All the best.
Thanks for the feedback...
It's pretty amazing when you think about it, that I have written over a hundred poems here on steemit and you come along to correct one word that makes you more money than a hundred of my Haïkus... We can chalk it up to online poetic justice!
ps Spelling is Arbitrary, especially with ARTis+s
Enjoy, Ravi@ZENjoy
https://steemit.com/haiku/@zenjoy/spelling-an-anglo-haiku-by-zenjoy
I'm just trying to leave a helpful comment other than the usual "good job" and "nice work."