An Original Haiku: Colour Master
This haiku was created for the @prydefoltz Challenge: Haiku Saturday Round 6
All round, we are spoiled for choice
Stunning myriads!
When your palette runs dry!
You’re still able to - WOW!
Bleached of colour,
You dazzle with white!
Haikus are a Japanese traditional poetry form which uses 17 morae to tell a story. In English the accepted format is 17 syllables in a 5-7-5 line structure.
The challenge is to express your thoughts with with a minimum of words, similarly to Earnest Hemingway's famous six word sentence.
Woop woop three wicked good Haikus!! Well done bro.
Thanks, bro! I'm looking to build and create haiku structured poetry...
How are things at your end?
You're nailing them. Things are good here man. So man projects on the go - almost done that dtube short film. Sound design is taking longer than expected. Having to learn a lot - Wich takes time but it's worth it. Going to start posting more fiction too. First bit of that is comming up in the next few days. Going to try and shoot some photos to go along with it.
How's things with you? Would you be interested in working on something together. I start a story - you continue it - I add to your part - and so on. Every week we alternate publishing the updated story. Just something I'm thinking about.
This is eerie, dude - While you were commenting here, I was checking out cinevlog 4... deep dude deep (your post)
Yeah i'm looking forward to your little flick. Yeah best take your time and be 110% satisfied. Film and writing is your calling for sho' - just keep them rolling out bro!
Always bro! I would love to work on a project with you...we can hook up on discord and discuss details...
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Your triplets are tree times more stunning than just one - they compliment one another, triggering additional thoughts of a reader. Standing alone they're absolutely complete haikus, but together they're more than that! It's like being able to look at something from another point of view, as if you could get a critique comments on your piece by three different people and enrich your own perception of the piece.
These three haikus themselves are like a white ray of light becoming the whole rainbow when being refracted! Haha, interestingly they're talking about colours and they're colours themselves!
Thank-you @liverussian, for the kind words - don't forget this is your idea, I'm simply running with it ;)
And then you get all scientific on me - Hha!!!
Truly gorgeous series of haiku, RLT:)
As the new adage goes...
"only the very best for Pryde"
I like that adage:)
Hha, I'm sure you do... :)
By far my favorite entry to #haikusaturday that I have seen so far! AWESOMENESS!!! and that first image.....stop playing! I could stare at that for hours!!!!
@karmashine - I'm humbled by your kind words.
Namaste