An Original Haiku: Artificial Intelligence
Sinister plan in motion?!
Human redundance.
Haikus are a Japanese traditional poetry form which uses 17 morae to tell a story. In English the accepted format is 17 syllables in a 5-7-5 line structure.
The challenge is to express your thoughts with with a minimum of words, similarly to Earnest Hemingway's famous six word sentence.
Cool! I'm about to reply on the contest post and I resteemed this.
That's interesting how western haiku go into the HT area unlike the traditional Japanese observing of nature)))
I loved this one! Brief, with carefully chosen words and a strong message
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You, are quite correct, the western style of Haiku has taken on a life of it's own. I'm personally, ignorant of the Japanese style.
Authentic is always better then a cheap copy )
I'm Russian, we have always loved nature, but, when writing haiku, I can never be just an observer, there is always a conclusion in mine, ahaha, which is not supposed to be in haiku ) I was interested in this style and read a few articles about how big haiku is in Japan! Well, I'm glad that there is YOU in your haiku, that's the most important thing for a creator!
Interesting Analysis...
I don't tend to think of western style haiku as a cheap copy, I think it's a new original, with new possibilities and more subjects to include...
I like the part where the YOU is evident in the haiku...well said!
Thank-you for sharing your great knowledge of Haiku with me. :)