Here is today's attempt ... it is definitely written with a nod to the language it is conceived in and reads concrete as opposed to abstract/pictorial but I hope the pivot points are strong ... the way I see it there are two really. Let me know what you think ... don't be shy. You have a lot of intellectual knowledge. I like that.https://steemit.com/thirtdayhaikuchallenge/@prydefoltz/spring-s-jolly-sovereign-30-day-haiku-and-color-challenge