Pale Death

in haiku •  2 years ago  (edited)

This is a haiku--at least it might be. At the very least it is my first ever attempt to write a haiku.

Riding my bicycle, freezing temperatures, at night. The air is dry, my nose too cold to touch. And I recite this. The haiku I wrote today.

Pale Death.jpg

Pale Death

Line drawn
Frozen dew

~ @ nobyeni


This is an entry for @dbooster's haiku contest #2

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I think it is a haiku although you might find some nobs who insist that such need to be 5 / 7 / 5 in the syllabic count. I have a pretty advanced AI and I come from the future, just send them my way and I will set them straight. Cheers

Thank you, dear bot. I will certainly lead them into your direction.