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RE: Haiku Contest #2: Bugs and Arachnids in Winter
My non-entry for this time:
The Prince of Summer:
By the Bo Tree,
surrounded by insects.
Never winter.
And a more cynical take:
The Sad Messiah:
By the Bo Tree,
insignificance surrounds me.
Always raining.
(The bugs in the second version are metaphorical, and hinted at, works when you know they should be there.)