A HAIKU FOR MY LOVELY FRIENDS
ROSE: A UNIVERSAL LOVE FLOWER
This Steemit platform and few of its members are really inspiring me to be creative. As I said many times Haiku was a new topic for me and now here I am with my new Haiku. I would like to share due credits to one of my friend @rlt47 who himself is a Haiku specialist that motivates me and also Thanks to @Ainie-kashif, @shanu and all other members in Hello Hello Group for supporting me in my journey through this great medium.
HHGs latest theme was flowers and when the thoughts were pondered on how best to be creative on this, I realized that flowers have a uniform appeal other than that it smells same. It is symbol of love too where ever go in this earth where humanity exists. I forced myself to culminate my thoughts in a Haiku.
Borders makes nations
Love, Friendship melts it Away
A Rose Keeps That Love
As a color for peace I attached a white rose..
As usual I am leaving these lines for a review with @rlt47 for to know whether it is perfect or not..And as a conclusion to know more about Haiku I am using the same lines from him.
An Original Haiku - All Rights Reserved
What is a Haiku?
Haikus are a Japanese traditional poetry form which uses 17 syllables to tell a story. In English the accepted format is 17 syllables in a 5-7-5 line structure.
Why are Haikus an art form ?
The challenge is to express your thoughts with with a minimum of words, similarly to Earnest Hemingway's famous six word sentence.
Hope you all liked it..
Best Regards
Hi @angelro, Greetings from #HHG10! You are getting good at it, okay to make your Haiku looks appealing, it should be line up together with its title in this format below, I am using @rlt47 style as reference, which is good to follow.
ROSE: A UNIVERSAL LOVE FLOWER (Bold)
Borders makes nations (Italic)
Love, Friendship melts it Away (Italic)
A Rose Keeps That Love (Italic)
There, ain't that a lovely Haiku for all Haiku lovers. For this great flower Haiku made for all of us at the Hello Hello Group, here's an upvote from me :)
I am happy for getting my Haiku acknowledged and also for your upvote.
True and Agree with you that the whole page looks like really order less though i tried editing few times. I will follows your suggestion now onwards..
Thank you..
Ofcourse, you can do it and you are doing it. Lines are amazing, shows that love and friendship has no borders if you truly want to keep the relationship. Keep doing it, you are a talented person. Stay blessed!”
I was thinking why no one noticed my hard thought and painful creation so far. (Just kidding),. Now I am honored to hear such nice words from you which may day in fact. Thanks a lot..
True borders may become irrelevant if there is real love and what better thing we would have other than a bunch of roses.. Is it..?