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RE: "SEC20/WK4: Graphic Design Hands - On practical 1"

in #graphics-s20wk46 days ago

Hello @josepha thank you for participating in this week's lesson. We have assessed your entry and we present the result of our assessment below.

Feedback:

Let me start by commending you for the effort put into this practical work. Weldone. Your result is not bad, It's obvious you really wanted to follow me right from top to bottom and I appreciate. I would just point out how you should have done it better.

You didn't use the exact size I used but that's not a problem, if you can position your element and give them the size proportional to the size/dimension you have chosen, it would still come out fine.

You obviously tried to do the above but fell a little short in the aspect of balance, as a principle. The image and that white circle effect seem to have been blown out of proportion while the text element looks small and have been swallowed up by the image element and it effect.

I want you to picture the design in a tabular form, the text element on one side and the image element on the other, to achieve balance, you have to ensure that the total size of your text element put together is the same or close to that of your image element, by so doing non would overshadow the other.

Another thing you need to take note of in you design is the space to your right and left, it must match, it's another aspect of balance as well and your element must not be too close to the edge on the right, left, top, bottom, there must be allowance so that it doesn't get cut off in the process of printing the design.

In all, you did beautifully well and I must commend your effort. I hope you keep up with the energy level dear student.

CriteriaRemark
Plagiarism Free
AI Free
Attention to details4.8/5
Overall Outcome4.8/5
Total score9.6/10

Regards
@lhorgic❤️

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Thank you sir for your review.

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