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RE: "SEC20/WK3: Typography and Practical Application."

in #graphics-s20wk311 months ago (edited)

Hello @ninapenda thank you for participating in this week's lesson. We have assessed your entry and we present the result of our assessment below.

Feedback:

• You have clearly defined Typography the way you best understand it and I appreciate the remarkable effort you put into your explanation.

• You have also answered the question two task which states that you discuss about 3 other font categories you personally researched just according to the task. Weldone.

• Finally, you did well in your practical and I must commend your effort. However I have few things to point out that will help you become better.

a. Your first typographic designs looks cool except for the blue colour used, I think white would have been better. In addition, I love the way you used the principle of hierarchy.

b. Your combo in image two is just perfect, I can see a blend of San serif and serif typeface. I would recommend that you don't let your element (Text) be too close to the edge because if you're to print it, the printer might cut part of it off as part of the margin.

c. When using stylish, decorative or handwritten typefaces just like you did in image three, avoid writing them in uppercase (capital letters) as it doesn't bring out the beauty of the typeface. I did the same with mine in the lesson given. Instead of "GRAPHIC DESIGN" write as "Graphic Design". Try this and see how it appears.

d. The colour for your upper body text in image four seems not be be very visible, it fainted into the background colour. Don't be afraid to tweak your colours to give you your desired result, always remember you're in control. One of the goals of typography is visibility, and as such you are to employ every measure to make it visible and readable....using hierarchy, colours, emphasis etc.

e. Lastly, you did not talk about the principles you engaged in creating these beautiful typographic designs of yours.

In all, you have presented beautifully well and I must commend your effort. I hope you keep up with the energy level.

CriteriaRemark
Plagiarism Free
AI Free
Attention to details4.7/5
Overall Outcome4.8/5
Total score9.5/10

Regards
@lhorgic❤️

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Thank you so much sir for the feedback. I am glad I tried and I've learned something this week. I'll keep practicing to gain perfection.

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