So, is it an RTS? Is it a MOBA? Is it a base builder in the style of Game Of War? Your review is full of a lot of information and pictures, but not all of it seems relevant to the reader. At least, that's how I see it. The supported phones and supported PC details are probably not necessary, and the intro should be short and sweet.

Draw your reader into your article in the first paragraph. If you don't have them hooked within the first 5 sentences, they're not going to read the entire thing.

Stop on by the #proofreading-posts channel in Gamers United, I'll help you out.