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Confucius Don't Say

The Most Dangerous Writing App (TMDWA) #3
Stream-of-Consciousness Writing Exercise


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Confucius Don't Say

Yellow bird that skirts the edge,
Speaking in dulcet tones to
A woman in a duvet.

Dog sing the language.
Bone crush impetus.
Send the scent.

Men in rustic overtone,
Suits slightly large to
Puff up sunshine ego.

Entrance, exit, withal, without:
Trying times that test limitation
Of bloodbath & insecurity.

People that ramble.
Humility that bites its cheek
And swirls decending from multiple tasks.

He would have, he intoned.
Yet a yearn struck between forehead
And cancelled that inclination.

China ochre reticence.
Extrovert bane of fish.
Eating tradition that
Scrimshaws.

Continuation of a
Shy plum that dimple
Smiles in back of room.

I wistfully reflected.
It was nothing that meant
Yet something sat in the echo
That watched me.


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This piece was created in a five minute session in "The Most Dangerous Writing App,". Using this website, if you stop or slow down writing for more that a couple of seconds, all your work will be destroyed.

My rules for this game is to only do minor editing afterward, preserving the original stream-of-consciousness result for the most part. Here is the unedited result:


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Yellow bird that skirts the edge
Speaking in dulcet tones to
A woman in a duvet

Dog sing the language
Bone crush impetus
Send the scent

Men in rustic overtones
Suits slightly large to
Puff up sunshine ego

Entrance, exit, withal, without
Trying times that test limitation
Of bloodbath & insecurity

People that ramble.
Humility that bites its cheek
And swirls decending from multiple tasks.

He would have, he intoned
Yet a yearn struck between forehead
And cancelled that inclination

China ochre reticence
Extrovert bane of fish
Eating tradition that
Scrimshaws

Continuation of a
Shy plum that dimple
Smiles in back of room

I wistfully reflected,
It was nothing that meant
Yet something sat in the echo
That watched me.


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This is my third post of this exercise series. To add more pressure, I am posting the result on Steemit for all to see! The rules are you can only do minor edits afterward, and formatting/ punctuation/ spelling. If you want to join me in this exercise, you can use "tmdwa" in your tags (the most dangerous writing app).

If you do at least a FIVE(5) minute session and post it under the tag "tmdwa," I will curate your post. Don't be shy! It's fun, and will help you reduce hesitation in your writing :)


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Wholeness,
@d-pend
8/9/17

All images are
free domain use.


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Had you ever heard of The Most Dangerous Writing App before? Try out a 3 MINUTE SESSION (shortest option) and post the result in the comments below for a little reward! ;) Also, if you want to join me in this writing practice, use the tag "tmdwa" on your post if you put it on Steemit :o)


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Ha that's a really cool find, like it.
Here's my rather worrying unedited attempt...

No hardcore core of apples cor and macaws caw, a round of guffaws in the tent early morning haze and the howler monkeys vibrating the jungle air intensity jet engines drowned out by their mating calls and banana fingered fingers single middle erect and giving the call caw core cor and all the macaws jealous sat in the jungle in their elaborate colourful feather monkey brained careless

Lol, I enjoyed that!

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