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RE: An Unfortunate Adventure! #freewritemadness: Day Seven
It maybe just my frequent need to over explain things, but it feels as if Katéa abandoned the idea of going back too quickly... otherwise, nice chapter, not as much dialogue, and such a faeric touch the pixie orgy was
I was a bit worried about that too. Abandoning the idea of going back too quickly... I was also worried about that pixie orgy, haha. It was not as detailed as I wanted it to be, but I didn't really want to post in all its overly vivid glory here in Steemit.
With the abandonment, though; I kind of justify it in that back home, the tales of the Min Min Lights say that those who are lured away are never seen again. There's someone else in this strange land who also followed the lights, and was still there, walking straight into the Pixie Party. So there's a bit of logic buried in the back of her mind that the tales are true, the people are never seen again, because they're dumped into a new inescapable world.
I'm still planning on her talking with Quint soon; not too sure how that will go yet, though.