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RE: Day 137: 5 Minute Freewrite: Monday - Prompt: witches
I really enjoyed this, it was a very interesting journey and it kept the reader interested. If I may give a tiny suggestion? i would cut out the 'nice' in the last line, because it disrupts to rhythm (at least, to me). Good writing, I particularly liked:
But the moon refused to hear the witch