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RE: Black, White, and RED All Over, part 9 -- Ironwood Hamilton from #freewrite in an extended story!
This is a whole book. The commissioner might have gotten away with it if he hadn't invited Lee for a drink, now the people will have a trail to follow. Great story line.
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Thank you for reading ... yes, it IS a whole book, quite by happy accident on my part!
Yes, indeed, that was the commissioner's fatal mistake ... a little combination of a soft attempt at intimidation and flattery, plus drink, and he achieves the exact outcome he is trying to avoid. It is possible that he would have been found out in the end anyway, because the good guys have enough information to figure it out ... but his chances of survival would have been much better...
That's what happens when you always want to be in control
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Yes... Commissioner Thomas is a microcosm of the mindset that causes all the problems...