DAY 115 FIVE MINUTES FREEWRITE.PROMPT:MASON JAR
The lips of the world opens but says nothing.
A moth sings in the blade of flame
A candle delivered.
We are children of dead gods,
Fallen seraphims that sing no alleluia.
Where is my name here?
My hand is poring on themselves
In this glass pane?
But where is my identity?
See you, flowers in the jar fading in the sun,
Like vintage pictures pairing
A younger self with a beautiful woman;
I have forgotten her name.
Come home, come home.
This is it, a song or not.
I (h)ate poetry and jam.
What is the sum of all of this?
This freewrite that bleeds of something sad,
Something painful, something
That has eaten away all of this soul
And left the little blade of flame
The candle saved?
That left this broken jar to hold
Faded petals together again
The lips of the world opened and rain fell.
My body is soaked in the sun and
The light is heavy with warmth.
I am drowning with the last of the flood,
The one Noah never saw,
The one the Bible never told,
The one Adam never named,
The one between you and I.
It is four minutes and it is late.
It is your footsteps again and
It is walking away.
It is a quiet night, muttering about lonely men,
It is the last line in a verse
That knows how to say goodbye.
I am a mason jar, cracked at the end
Like everything that lives here.
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The End.
This took some doing. I am half asleep. Lol.. I think I half forgot the prompt, but it's the fun part right? Well this is day 115 of the daily #freewrite fun. You can check out what it's all about here https://steemit.com/freewrite/@mariannewest/day-115-5-minute-freewrite-sunday-prompt-mason-jar
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So, you don't like poetry and jam - but what about a poetry jam?
Now that I can do. A poetry jam is superb!
This guy is a god
This was a great freewrite! Thanks for sharing.
Following you!
So few people bother to write poetry. I loved your poem.
Here is the prompt for today: https://steemit.com/freewrite/@mariannewest/day-116-5-minute-freewrite-monday-prompt-canal
That is not right darling ... A lot of people write poetry on steemit and Our Community proves it ...
For 28 days we have 90+ members most of them poets too... :P And this is just the beginning... :)
Well man :) this is just amazing piece I got to give it to ya :) May be because you were half asleep you got a divine intervention :) Just lovely poem and post :0 Will be featured for sure :) too...
Thanks @angelveselinov. I hope the divine intervention didn't leave after this post...
Wow! Was wondering where this was going and then, bam!
I am drowning with the last of the flood,
The one Noah never saw,
The one the Bible never told,
The one Adam never named,
The one between you and I.
I hope you're inspired to do today's prompt: church.
😂 I surprised myself too. Thanks for stopping by. I will check it out.