The Inheritance - Day 54: 5 Minute Freewrite
It began with the incessant rain. The drip, drip, drip on the trailer roof. The drip became a thunderous pelting. Damn the hole in the roof. Where is a bucket? I scrambled to find a tin bucket or even a bowl. This tin can shack was all I had and the dismal lighting was making it hard to locate a container.
I finally found a pail. It was cob webby and ancient. I peered onto the deep pail and found a rather large package wrapped tight and secured with twine and a dark, dirty tarp. Suddenly, I forgot the roof leak and the rain beating Gramma's trailer. I ripped open the package. If nothing else, this would be amusing. Jobless and homeless before Gramma willed her old, damp, run-down trailer to me. At least I had a home of sorts.
I tried to tear open the heavy package. In exasperation, I found a dull knife in her kitchen drawer and sawed it open.
Inside, even in the dimness, heavy gold bars gleamed at me like promised children and I cradled them with surprise. The rain now poured onto the dilapidated floor and I smiled as I slid the empty pot under that musical stream.
This ends my Day 54: 5 Minute Freewrite hosted by @mariannewest join the fun here:
Day 54: 5 Minute Freewrite

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I guess Gramma forgot to "Kick the Bucket" on her way out to let everyone know where her treasure was? 🤔
Haha I guess so! Thanks for reading and commenting! <3
Very nice #freewrite post! I really enjoyed reading this.
Thank you very much for stopping by and commenting... I'm so glad that you enjoyed this! Following your blog now <3
Loved the end!!! so happy!
Thank you @snook. I'm just having too much fun when I finally get to sit down and write one of these. I hope you and the hubby are well today.
That was a nice happy ending!!
Aww thanks! It's on of those days with the car at the shop! Gimme gold in a bucket, please! Haha
Thanks for being first to take a look and comment!
Great writing and a nice ending 👍
Thank you! These prompts surprise me everyday.. I never know where my brain is going to take these words! <3
lol my brain is often the same all over the place
Crazy fun, though!
That’s great :)
Nice ending!! With all the gruesome freewriters about - I was a bit worried what they might find
Thank you! Yes, there are some scary stories, but all well written. This little tale seemed to write itself.