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RE: Excuses, part of a novel for nanowrimo, set in the world of Chibera, and written using the prompt from -5minutefreewrite Comedy Open Mic Round 38
I can see this as a delightful movie... You throw some many things in there that make me stop and scratch my head and then smile like sheep who do not bleat I'm getting stung in the back of the throat by a wasp! I was totally wrapped into this chapter and felt that I was right in the action. Great job with your descriptions. #NovMadFan